Horse Eden : Critiques and advice

I'm currently healing my daith and flat so that's why I can't really get another flat but my goal is 4 flats this one is putting up a fight with healing though slept on it once on accident and giant piercing bump formedXD its going away now but the flat and daith are so temperamental when healing

The Barefoot Barn

08:16:53 B

I have both nostril, my septum, my bellybutton, 2 daith, 2 flat, 2 helix, and I really want to get another 😭

Wings Of Glory

08:15:18 O Great Potato Wing

Also tranquility it's nice to see all of yall and be back I was offline for so long!

Wings Of Glory

08:13:31 O Great Potato Wing

I have my septum done thinking of both my nostrils but I've got 4 lobes on each side 1 daith 1 flat and 3 helixes

The Barefoot Barn

08:10:27 B

If you don't have the nostril ones, get them, I love them, plus they didn't hurt. Other than that, maybe the bellybutton or septum.

Tranquility

08:09:52 Yellow/Cyra

Wings! It's nice to see ya back! <3

Wings Of Glory

08:08:11 O Great Potato Wing

I want to get another piercing but I don't know which one 😭😭

Valhalla Acreage

08:01:32 Eivor

The poor thing was tired when we caught her but she was safe and sound when I let her go

Wraithcry Farm

07:57:36 Celeste 🌕

The puppy is committing crimes
🫥

Darkside Dreams

07:57:08 Grape | X hoarder

Ooh that's rough. Got it out without damage to yourself, the house, or the precious birb though?

Valhalla Acreage

07:55:56 Eivor

Grape a wild one darn thing thing came in our pellet stove and then when I tried to get it from there it got in the house

Darkside Dreams

07:54:04 Grape | X hoarder

Eivor, there was a pigeon loose at work the other day. Was it a pet bird or a bird bird?

Darkside Dreams

07:53:32 Grape | X hoarder

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Critiques and advice

January 3, 2021 04:12 PM

The Dude Ranch

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So I'm just starting out with doing manes and tails and so I messed around and made this this morning, what do you guys think?.

I know I have to work on drawing out the mane (I'm not a very good drawer when it comes to that lol) but what else could I work on.

Also I will be adding credits to it as well

Edited at January 3, 2021 04:12 PM by The Dude Ranch

Critiques and advice

January 7, 2021 07:40 AM

Shadow Woods

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Not a bad start! Definitely play around with the brush settings to see what you can get. Also, on the tail did you leave a chunk of the hair from the original picture? I can see something behind the hair that you drew. When you can make manes and tails, you should probably make it so that it's not visible. It could use more dimension to the hair, try adding shadows and highlights, that should help!

Edit: add some hair flyaways and breakup some of the patches to make it look more natural

Edited at January 7, 2021 07:42 AM by Shadow Woods

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