 09:08:54 | It ios a personal OC of mine I finally found a good base for :) |
09:06:20 Terici/Dino/Trish| if its a piece youre keeping or already sold yes if it may be for sale/is for sale you dunno what youre doing with it yet then no |
09:05:32 | Can I share an art piece I did in here or is it only in sales? I wasn't selling it but I do have an ad in sales... and I didn't want to get in trouble |
08:52:11 Vixie holy shit... I just noticed she's on the WBLB and not low on it either >.>
-HEE Click- |
08:51:11 Dulcie/Crazy Rapcoon
If they don't have the 🐸 at the beginning someone else renamed them |
08:50:07 Celeste 🌕 Neighbors Dog managed to dig themselves halfway into my yard tonight.
Police called, all I was told was I was allowed to defend my property any way necessary.
I am going to try electric fencing to see if that stops them. But this big ass dog is being aggressive and I am at the end of my kindness rope |
08:49:44 Dulcie/Crazy Flare
Would you mind sending me a PM of their links? |
08:46:43 Flare <3 Dulcie,
Simon Riley or LE Valhalla might work. |
08:46:11 Rapcoon | Jester dulcie
idk but I love her most recent colt's name xD love the reference😂 |
08:43:48 Dulcie/Crazy Any suggestions for who to breed her to?
I wasn't impressed with how the Sevlo cross turned out
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08:36:33 Luna's SD Ponies| Mav lol I hope it works out <3 |
08:30:41 mav/maverick| im trying to convince him to not leave the US this summer and wait a few years and take me with him. |
08:29:51 mav/maverick i find it funny that im the only other person besides T that can get through to his dumbass.
he listens to me. very well. most of the time. |
08:29:02 Luna's SD Ponies| Lol, that sounds like my husband at times too XD |
08:28:29 mav/maverick| which that definetly didnt happen last night... |
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Looks incredible! I love the muscle definition. In my opinion, . You need different shades of brown. Grey muzzle, maybe lighter orange/yellow around the points, like chest, armpit, flank, muzzle, etc. darker brown on the bony parts and over the back, on the withers, forehead, etc. Example. Hair, you need more shading. It's really nice and detailed, but it's a bit strong. You can make the lighting a bit more dramatic over the whole horse, which will make it seem like it fits in better. Purple parts can be darkened (I would use a near black colour on soft light or overlay, and then smudge and blur it to get the desired effect). And then the yellow are the bright highlights, which I would make a similar colour to your backlight, so a bright red/purple. Make sure to do the shadow and highlights on seperate layers from the hair, using a clipping mask Hair idea. Personally, I would also darken your current strands of hair a smidge, and redo some highlight strands with the shade you're currently using! I would also add some shadowy strands. (Not really sure how to describe this, sorry! . Lighting, darken up the front of the horse because that's away from the light (but not too much because you need to still see the horse, I showed kind of where I would darken it using purple), and yellow is where I would add the lighting. Example of lighting I would do lighting similar to how I did my My firework piece I do lighting with add, overlay, or soflight and use an almost white colour on a seperate layer. Darkness I use almost black and either soft light or overlay. Blue is kinda where I'd position a shadow, and I choose a colour that's almost black and lower the opacity. I would add some more light where I added the white dot, to make it more dramatic. Personally, I'd also make the eye a little bit bigger, as that's a central focus of the horses face. . I love the vibe of this piece, the stock and the background work really well together and the horse really seems to be there! The patterns also turned out really nice, especially in the darker lighting! I can't wait to see how much more you improve in the future! . Edit: forgot to mention, I would also blur the background a bit and add some vignette! And usually tobiano comes with a face marking, so that might help bring the piece together. Heres a very messy example of all the changes I've suggested implemented on the actual piece! https://i.ibb.co/9b1h0Ts/IMG-8191.png |
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Sagebrush said:
Looks incredible! I love the muscle definition. In my opinion, . You need different shades of brown. Grey muzzle, maybe lighter orange/yellow around the points, like chest, armpit, flank, muzzle, etc. darker brown on the bony parts and over the back, on the withers, forehead, etc. Example. Hair, you need more shading. It's really nice and detailed, but it's a bit strong. You can make the lighting a bit more dramatic over the whole horse, which will make it seem like it fits in better. Purple parts can be darkened (I would use a near black colour on soft light or overlay, and then smudge and blur it to get the desired effect). And then the yellow are the bright highlights, which I would make a similar colour to your backlight, so a bright red/purple. Make sure to do the shadow and highlights on seperate layers from the hair, using a clipping mask Hair idea. Personally, I would also darken your current strands of hair a smidge, and redo some highlight strands with the shade you're currently using! I would also add some shadowy strands. (Not really sure how to describe this, sorry! . Lighting, darken up the front of the horse because that's away from the light (but not too much because you need to still see the horse, I showed kind of where I would darken it using purple), and yellow is where I would add the lighting. Example of lighting I would do lighting similar to how I did my My firework piece I do lighting with add, overlay, or soflight and use an almost white colour on a seperate layer. Darkness I use almost black and either soft light or overlay. Blue is kinda where I'd position a shadow, and I choose a colour that's almost black and lower the opacity. I would add some more light where I added the white dot, to make it more dramatic. Personally, I'd also make the eye a little bit bigger, as that's a central focus of the horses face. . I love the vibe of this piece, the stock and the background work really well together and the horse really seems to be there! The patterns also turned out really nice, especially in the darker lighting! I can't wait to see how much more you improve in the future! . Edit: forgot to mention, I would also blur the background a bit and add some vignette! And usually tobiano comes with a face marking, so that might help bring the piece together. Heres a very messy example of all the changes I've suggested implemented on the actual piece! https://i.ibb.co/9b1h0Ts/IMG-8191.png
Wow. I'm a huge fan of your pieces and I love the improvements you have made - totally agree! I struggle with lighting so I will be doing a massive focus on it. Thanks for all the critique, I know I takes time. Will be taking this onboard! |
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