Cedar Wood Farms
11:53:39 Cedar
Now I have an excuse to keep you! Seal and Premium bravery. Maybe you will have good ratings?
-HEE Click-
Autumn's Dawn
11:41:25 Autumn/Dawn
Salem
Sorry for the late reply.

I know, right? It's like they're just refusing to listen to you when you are the Roleplay creator!

Well, goodnight. See ya around!^^
Salem
11:40:50 Salem / Salt
Bye 80HD :<
-Sweet-Poison-
11:40:29 Bau, Wild
gotta poof, bye shayshay <3
Salem
11:40:27 Salem / Salt
80HD
Its youtube :0
-Sweet-Poison-
11:40:09 Bau, Wild
shayshay

no love, i dont watch TV ^^"
sadly
Salem
11:37:35 Salem / Salt
80HD
Have you watched helluva boss? There's a scene from there that I'm reminded of :3
Salem
11:36:51 Salem / Salt
My gawd the forums look way too big on mobile-
-Sweet-Poison-
11:36:37 Bau, Wild
shayshay

boy am i exited to wake up to that...
Salem
11:34:47 Salem / Salt
80HD
Creepy crawly-ing on the ceiling >:)
-Sweet-Poison-
11:34:17 Bau, Wild
shayshay

alright thats acceptable <3
Salem
11:33:50 Salem / Salt
80HD
you know the ones that hang around on the ceiling like bats? Ima do that. It seems super fun, if I cant chase you up the stairs
-Sweet-Poison-
11:32:14 Bau, Wild
shayshay

dont chase me up stairs then love, simple lol, i dont care what ya do but not that
Salem
11:31:36 Salem / Salt
Autumn
>.> I know what you mean so well its unbelievable
Salem
11:30:45 Salem / Salt
80HD
Take away my oranges and feel my wrath >:( how dare you even consider that
Autumn's Dawn
11:30:27 Autumn/Dawn
Salem
No, I'm on a Chromebook and it's hard.

I have to agree. Back on WolfPlay, in my Roleplay, I had a strict Sign-Up sheet. Like, no adding anything to it (Ex, added "Name Meaning" replaced by "Name pronunciation"), y'know what I mean? Sometimes it's infuriating.
-Sweet-Poison-
11:30:06 Bau, Wild
shayshay

i swear please, ill take away the oranges, in fact, i just wont buy them anymore
Salem
11:29:17 Salem / Salt
80HD
but its fun to crawl up stairs reall fast like a demon :3
-Sweet-Poison-
11:28:03 Bau, Wild
shayshay

no because i have five sets of stairs please dont T^T
Salem
11:27:20 Salem / Salt
80HD
I'll find you as a ghost :') a creepy shadow that'll chase ya up stairs
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Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:52 AM


Golden Crest
 
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Hey everyone!

I am still learning the ropes of art and finding my style, so I would love some critique of my progress so far. Here are some pieces I have done with different themes, I would love if anyone experienced in the art field could please give me some pointers?

I really do thank you in advance and appreciate your time :)



Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:36 PM


Olive
 
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Though im not in the art field id like to say your style is unique in a way and really cute
But #1 The WIngs Need To be Blended Into The Body And The Color Match the Coat
#2 Your Eyes Need A Bit Of Work
#3 Try Blending your legs Into The Grass A Bit more or add a layer or grass ontop of it
#4 same thing
#5 I think the fawns lighting is a bit off
#6 its my favorite but try to blend the socket of the wing in a bit
Art Critique December 19, 2023 04:21 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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I agree with Olive, but the biggest thing is shadows and reflections <3 I don't know which app you use, but I love Krita.
I've been compiling my favorite tutorials for a while now, I'll edit in a bit with em<3
Edit: Here they all are, in no particular order :3
Roanies Manip Tutorial(Love this one!)
Hope these help<3

Edited at December 19, 2023 08:33 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique December 20, 2023 02:45 PM


WildWillow
 
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The first things I notice are a lack of a shadow on the ground and a lack of depth (shadow/highlight) on your horses. I definitely recommend checking out the tutorials that KPH has listed. I think learning to place a shadow on the ground as well as add shadows and highlights to your horse, mane/tail, and wings will really take your art to a next level. :) I go over this in my tutorial (KPH linked to it).

I think another thing to pay attention to is the tone of your background compared to the horse. For example, the background of your last piece is very blue/green toned while your horse has more of a yellow tone. If your program has a Color Balance tool, you can use this to adjust the tone of your horse to match the same tones as your background. This can be super helpful to get your horse to "fit" in its background.
You can also adjust the tones of the "extras" in your art (antlers, wings, animals) to fit both your horse and the background.
It's amazing what difference the little details can make!

I think you really have down the other major foundation components to art - such as horse body prep and the beginnings of grounding. For your grounding, I would go in with a softer, translucent brush to erase legs so it blends easier into your background.
I really like your manes and tails - that last piece especially has some phenomenal hair action!

If you have any questions, my mailbox is always open!

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