Horse Eden Eventing Game
Horse Eden Eventing Game


Year: 204   Season: Spring   
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Casanova
07:01:54 
Ah darn my 1/1 boy is no longer 1/1 lol Well hopefully he trains decent, he’s the only good thing I ended up with this RO -HEE Click-
Cinquemani
06:58:15 Emani
I'd like a colt on here. But I guess its not bad I'm building up a few mares... I only had 3 lol
Thornwood Manor
06:55:22 Caal
I prayed for colts a few game years agoand got a few good ones. Now it's still going and all of my fillies have been strictly EEE 🙃
Cinquemani
06:54:26 Emani
She is very nice! I hope she trains well for you!

Mine might flop, but at least she could produce seal? Lol
Triple E
06:52:47 Campbell AD
Emani - she is lovely! I also got a really nice WWW KNN filly this year
-HEE Click-
Campbell Equestrian
06:51:44 Hails
I had a killer year, I did not have a single SH baby from two KNN parents out of over 100 babies
Cinquemani
06:51:30 Emani
-HEE Click-

Excited about her!
Campbell Equestrian
06:42:36 Hails
-HEE Click-

Omg she debuted at 17 at only 4! I cannot wait to see what this girl has in store!
Rubygem-Chenya
06:41:25 Ruby/Cheshire
Blue
That's gorgeous.
Bluegrass Racing
06:33:50 Blue
so pretty
-HEE Click-
Red Willow Stables
06:18:49 
I'll use an apple pencil on my drawing tablet but that's really it
Kk shows
06:16:47 
Red I am not a digital art person either I prefer paint, pencils, and paper
Centura stable
06:16:36 Centura
yeah same lol. Also my laptop doesn't let me use the touchscreen affect half the time
Red Willow Stables
06:10:10 
That stuff takes more practice than I have time for lol
Centura stable
06:09:19 Centura
I can't do well with either lol.
Red Willow Stables
06:09:04 
Not a big digital art person, I do better with pencils
Red Willow Stables
06:08:49 
it's okay! It looks really good though, better than anything I could draw
Centura stable
06:07:43 Centura
red
thanks, I always struggle with facial markings/nostrils lol
Red Willow Stables
06:07:03 
Centure
You should add some nostrils and facial markings like a star or snip
Thunderbolt Park
06:06:18 Bolt
Not sure sorry

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Casanova
07:01:54 
Ah darn my 1/1 boy is no longer 1/1 lol Well hopefully he trains decent, he’s the only good thing I ended up with this RO -HEE Click-
Cinquemani
06:58:15 Emani
I'd like a colt on here. But I guess its not bad I'm building up a few mares... I only had 3 lol
Thornwood Manor
06:55:22 Caal
I prayed for colts a few game years agoand got a few good ones. Now it's still going and all of my fillies have been strictly EEE 🙃
Cinquemani
06:54:26 Emani
She is very nice! I hope she trains well for you!

Mine might flop, but at least she could produce seal? Lol
Triple E
06:52:47 Campbell AD
Emani - she is lovely! I also got a really nice WWW KNN filly this year
-HEE Click-
Campbell Equestrian
06:51:44 Hails
I had a killer year, I did not have a single SH baby from two KNN parents out of over 100 babies
Cinquemani
06:51:30 Emani
-HEE Click-

Excited about her!
Campbell Equestrian
06:42:36 Hails
-HEE Click-

Omg she debuted at 17 at only 4! I cannot wait to see what this girl has in store!
Rubygem-Chenya
06:41:25 Ruby/Cheshire
Blue
That's gorgeous.
Bluegrass Racing
06:33:50 Blue
so pretty
-HEE Click-
Red Willow Stables
06:18:49 
I'll use an apple pencil on my drawing tablet but that's really it
Kk shows
06:16:47 
Red I am not a digital art person either I prefer paint, pencils, and paper
Centura stable
06:16:36 Centura
yeah same lol. Also my laptop doesn't let me use the touchscreen affect half the time
Red Willow Stables
06:10:10 
That stuff takes more practice than I have time for lol
Centura stable
06:09:19 Centura
I can't do well with either lol.
Red Willow Stables
06:09:04 
Not a big digital art person, I do better with pencils
Red Willow Stables
06:08:49 
it's okay! It looks really good though, better than anything I could draw
Centura stable
06:07:43 Centura
red
thanks, I always struggle with facial markings/nostrils lol
Red Willow Stables
06:07:03 
Centure
You should add some nostrils and facial markings like a star or snip
Thunderbolt Park
06:06:18 Bolt
Not sure sorry

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Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:52 AM


Golden Crest
 
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Hey everyone!

I am still learning the ropes of art and finding my style, so I would love some critique of my progress so far. Here are some pieces I have done with different themes, I would love if anyone experienced in the art field could please give me some pointers?

I really do thank you in advance and appreciate your time :)



Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:36 PM


Olive
 
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Though im not in the art field id like to say your style is unique in a way and really cute
But #1 The WIngs Need To be Blended Into The Body And The Color Match the Coat
#2 Your Eyes Need A Bit Of Work
#3 Try Blending your legs Into The Grass A Bit more or add a layer or grass ontop of it
#4 same thing
#5 I think the fawns lighting is a bit off
#6 its my favorite but try to blend the socket of the wing in a bit
Art Critique December 19, 2023 04:21 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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I agree with Olive, but the biggest thing is shadows and reflections <3 I don't know which app you use, but I love Krita.
I've been compiling my favorite tutorials for a while now, I'll edit in a bit with em<3
Edit: Here they all are, in no particular order :3
Roanies Manip Tutorial(Love this one!)
Hope these help<3

Edited at December 19, 2023 08:33 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique December 20, 2023 02:45 PM


WildWillow
 
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The first things I notice are a lack of a shadow on the ground and a lack of depth (shadow/highlight) on your horses. I definitely recommend checking out the tutorials that KPH has listed. I think learning to place a shadow on the ground as well as add shadows and highlights to your horse, mane/tail, and wings will really take your art to a next level. :) I go over this in my tutorial (KPH linked to it).

I think another thing to pay attention to is the tone of your background compared to the horse. For example, the background of your last piece is very blue/green toned while your horse has more of a yellow tone. If your program has a Color Balance tool, you can use this to adjust the tone of your horse to match the same tones as your background. This can be super helpful to get your horse to "fit" in its background.
You can also adjust the tones of the "extras" in your art (antlers, wings, animals) to fit both your horse and the background.
It's amazing what difference the little details can make!

I think you really have down the other major foundation components to art - such as horse body prep and the beginnings of grounding. For your grounding, I would go in with a softer, translucent brush to erase legs so it blends easier into your background.
I really like your manes and tails - that last piece especially has some phenomenal hair action!

If you have any questions, my mailbox is always open!

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