Aussie Stables
06:45:59 Aussie - Golden
Hopefully Thunda.
Shamrock Equines
06:45:15 Crowley
Opal
Still need more barns to accomplish that task.
White_thundacat
06:44:55 Thunda/Cat/Mom
It's just odd to me. I bet if she were put with a super strong D stud, she could pop out those WWWs
Aussie Stables
06:44:09 Aussie - Golden
Thanda I've had one before
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Leaderboard
White_thundacat
06:42:01 Thunda/Cat/Mom
I have never had a WW mare level in 2 areas wk 7.
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What does LB mean?
Ponies heaven
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-HEE Click- Dragon Academy RP, warning: its intense
Tamarack Mountain
06:39:48 Opal
well then put your best in a separate barn the LB part will follow ;)
HORSE$$
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Good Myth
madmaddie
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goodmorning horse people
Shamrock Equines
06:38:00 Crowley
Opal
At that rate are all flops. XD
Shamrock Equines
06:37:12 Crowley
Aussie
I made a EEE- barn.
Aussie Stables
06:35:38 Aussie - Golden
Myth a EEE+ ISH 50 barn and a EEE+ other breeds barn of 25 stalls
Tamarack Mountain
06:34:34 Opal
make one for you LB stock and one for flops to use as testers
Shamrock Equines
06:33:29 Crowley
Now I just need more SD barns.
Shamrock Equines
06:29:33 Crowley
Neither really have any color though...
Tamarack Mountain
06:27:37 Opal
sure you did
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Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:52 AM

Golden Crest
 
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Hey everyone!

I am still learning the ropes of art and finding my style, so I would love some critique of my progress so far. Here are some pieces I have done with different themes, I would love if anyone experienced in the art field could please give me some pointers?

I really do thank you in advance and appreciate your time :)



Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:36 PM

Olive
 
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Though im not in the art field id like to say your style is unique in a way and really cute
But #1 The WIngs Need To be Blended Into The Body And The Color Match the Coat
#2 Your Eyes Need A Bit Of Work
#3 Try Blending your legs Into The Grass A Bit more or add a layer or grass ontop of it
#4 same thing
#5 I think the fawns lighting is a bit off
#6 its my favorite but try to blend the socket of the wing in a bit
Art Critique December 19, 2023 04:21 PM

KPH Equestrian
 
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I agree with Olive, but the biggest thing is shadows and reflections <3 I don't know which app you use, but I love Krita.
I've been compiling my favorite tutorials for a while now, I'll edit in a bit with em<3
Edit: Here they all are, in no particular order :3
Roanies Manip Tutorial(Love this one!)
Hope these help<3

Edited at December 19, 2023 08:33 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique December 20, 2023 02:45 PM

WildWillow
 
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The first things I notice are a lack of a shadow on the ground and a lack of depth (shadow/highlight) on your horses. I definitely recommend checking out the tutorials that KPH has listed. I think learning to place a shadow on the ground as well as add shadows and highlights to your horse, mane/tail, and wings will really take your art to a next level. :) I go over this in my tutorial (KPH linked to it).

I think another thing to pay attention to is the tone of your background compared to the horse. For example, the background of your last piece is very blue/green toned while your horse has more of a yellow tone. If your program has a Color Balance tool, you can use this to adjust the tone of your horse to match the same tones as your background. This can be super helpful to get your horse to "fit" in its background.
You can also adjust the tones of the "extras" in your art (antlers, wings, animals) to fit both your horse and the background.
It's amazing what difference the little details can make!

I think you really have down the other major foundation components to art - such as horse body prep and the beginnings of grounding. For your grounding, I would go in with a softer, translucent brush to erase legs so it blends easier into your background.
I really like your manes and tails - that last piece especially has some phenomenal hair action!

If you have any questions, my mailbox is always open!

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