The Golden Stars
02:32:30 Noc
hi all
Mythological
02:28:25 Crowley | Myth
I need SCF. :-(
Bearplane
02:22:50 Bear / Bingus
Thanks Ari and Granny <3
Definitely gonna stew on this until RO lmao
Circle Star RIDs
02:21:57 Granny C
Boer kids are just the little darlings.
Neighbor down the road raises them.
Circle Star RIDs
02:19:31 Granny C
Perhaps a Dressage Medallion, since a Sven is a no go.
SugarplumStables
02:18:24 Brookie Cookie
Sam sorry it is kind of a bad picture but that was all I had.
SugarplumStables
02:17:13 Brookie Cookie
Sam!
-Click-
That was my fair goat last year he got third in his class and the two that won did really good at state fair! :)
The Joker
02:14:08 Ari <3
I think it looks pretty good itemless, Bingus :)
ShowJumpingChampions
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Sam
Thank you! Sorry it's late, I just had lunch.
Bignus Bognus
02:06:48 (totally not bingus)
I didn't think there were any obvious issues Granny ;-; thanks anyways though!
Circle Star RIDs
02:00:57 Granny C
bingus - well, that's the only item I can see as being of any use to cover all the issues.
Ah well, you do what you can do.
Bignus Bognus
01:59:13 (totally not bingus)
Granny a sven is the one item I can't afford :')
The embryo can sit in the freezer until I can buy the right item but a sven would take too long lol
Double C Stables
01:58:39 DC/Kate =3
working from home tomorrow has me so happy. and a half day tuesday to boot
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01:57:31 Granny C
Lilly - yer welcome :)
Jay MacKay's
01:56:36 Jay's Ghost
Dragons Ridge!
Snowfall!
I Summon thee!!
Circle Star RIDs
01:54:58 Granny C
Sven, if you can afford one
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Thanks Granny!
Bignus Bognus
01:51:06 (totally not bingus)
any item recommendations for my bigger match this year? -HEE Click-
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Im trying to use up the straws I have in my freezer instead of buying more XD
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I have to get used to actually having money in this game for once. I donÂ’t have to use the cheapest studs anymore
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Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:52 AM

Golden Crest
 
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Hey everyone!

I am still learning the ropes of art and finding my style, so I would love some critique of my progress so far. Here are some pieces I have done with different themes, I would love if anyone experienced in the art field could please give me some pointers?

I really do thank you in advance and appreciate your time :)



Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:36 PM

Olive
 
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Though im not in the art field id like to say your style is unique in a way and really cute
But #1 The WIngs Need To be Blended Into The Body And The Color Match the Coat
#2 Your Eyes Need A Bit Of Work
#3 Try Blending your legs Into The Grass A Bit more or add a layer or grass ontop of it
#4 same thing
#5 I think the fawns lighting is a bit off
#6 its my favorite but try to blend the socket of the wing in a bit
Art Critique December 19, 2023 04:21 PM

KPH Equestrian
 
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I agree with Olive, but the biggest thing is shadows and reflections <3 I don't know which app you use, but I love Krita.
I've been compiling my favorite tutorials for a while now, I'll edit in a bit with em<3
Edit: Here they all are, in no particular order :3
Roanies Manip Tutorial(Love this one!)
Hope these help<3

Edited at December 19, 2023 08:33 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique December 20, 2023 02:45 PM

WildWillow
 
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The first things I notice are a lack of a shadow on the ground and a lack of depth (shadow/highlight) on your horses. I definitely recommend checking out the tutorials that KPH has listed. I think learning to place a shadow on the ground as well as add shadows and highlights to your horse, mane/tail, and wings will really take your art to a next level. :) I go over this in my tutorial (KPH linked to it).

I think another thing to pay attention to is the tone of your background compared to the horse. For example, the background of your last piece is very blue/green toned while your horse has more of a yellow tone. If your program has a Color Balance tool, you can use this to adjust the tone of your horse to match the same tones as your background. This can be super helpful to get your horse to "fit" in its background.
You can also adjust the tones of the "extras" in your art (antlers, wings, animals) to fit both your horse and the background.
It's amazing what difference the little details can make!

I think you really have down the other major foundation components to art - such as horse body prep and the beginnings of grounding. For your grounding, I would go in with a softer, translucent brush to erase legs so it blends easier into your background.
I really like your manes and tails - that last piece especially has some phenomenal hair action!

If you have any questions, my mailbox is always open!

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