Autumn's Dawn
10:55:46 Autumn/Dawn
Sorry Hummer for not getting back to you right away.

Ah, I see. D'you know about Haiti, already? They carve away the flesh from the deceased human's body and scrape the bone to shine white and then they hang them. It's their culture, though, so we can't really blame them.
Bioshock Manor
10:52:46 Storm
The short series is amazing too
NorthStar Estates
10:52:44 JF | Jelly | Trillow
hummer
no not yet
Hummingbird Meadows
10:52:21 Hummer
@JF, have you read it before?
NorthStar Estates
10:51:05 JF | Jelly | Trillow
Hummer im super excited i just got it-
Hummingbird Meadows
10:50:35 Hummer
@Jelly, I just read that and it was awesome! The ending was sad though. ☹️
NorthStar Estates
10:49:19 JF | Jelly | Trillow
a good book is all the light we cannot see
Hummingbird Meadows
10:46:24 Hummer
Just that even though we said no more genocide after the holocaust, but there has still been genocide in Africa and other countries. Same thing with many other events throughout history. The fall of countries for example have many similarities.
Autumn's Dawn
10:35:40 Autumn/Dawn
Hummer
What do you mean?
Do you mean that people only recongnize other people when they get involved in something big (A war, for example)?
Hummingbird Meadows
10:33:51 Hummer
Yeah, I see your point. The most fascinating thing about history is we are supposed to learn from it, but it always repeats itself in some form.
Autumn's Dawn
10:30:42 Autumn/Dawn
Hummer
True, true. But they were only recognized after WWII because of the way the Germans treated them. I understand that they were always mistreated, by torturing and maltreating them. It's just straight up wrong. (I'm not disagreeing with you, by the way)
Whispering Windz
10:26:16 
Oh thank you so much
Moonrose Magic
10:25:50 🎀 Diva
It's an eye colour, game have several, green, hazel etc, pretty rare though
Ironworks Equestria
10:25:38 Reaver | Seven
Whispering,
I believe it comes from the champagne gene
Hummingbird Meadows
10:25:31 Hummer
@Autumn, Jews have frequently been used as a scapegoat throughout history, long before WWII.
Whispering Windz
10:24:51 
-HEE Click-

Can someone please explain to me how or why my horse has tiger eyes in color gene
Hot 2 Trot
10:22:07 ♡Holly♡
Autumn
Aw thats great.

It was totally heartbreaking how they treated the Jews. Devastating...
Aussie Stables
10:22:03 Yeah, i'm a guy lol
i'm sick, sore and tired too. trying to study and get some work done
Windsor Stables
10:21:59 Quinn
Bye!
Autumn's Dawn
10:21:45 Autumn/Dawn
Goodnight, Quinn. See you tomorrow sometime. Adios!^^
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Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:52 AM


Golden Crest
 
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Hey everyone!

I am still learning the ropes of art and finding my style, so I would love some critique of my progress so far. Here are some pieces I have done with different themes, I would love if anyone experienced in the art field could please give me some pointers?

I really do thank you in advance and appreciate your time :)



Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:36 PM


Olive
 
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Though im not in the art field id like to say your style is unique in a way and really cute
But #1 The WIngs Need To be Blended Into The Body And The Color Match the Coat
#2 Your Eyes Need A Bit Of Work
#3 Try Blending your legs Into The Grass A Bit more or add a layer or grass ontop of it
#4 same thing
#5 I think the fawns lighting is a bit off
#6 its my favorite but try to blend the socket of the wing in a bit
Art Critique December 19, 2023 04:21 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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I agree with Olive, but the biggest thing is shadows and reflections <3 I don't know which app you use, but I love Krita.
I've been compiling my favorite tutorials for a while now, I'll edit in a bit with em<3
Edit: Here they all are, in no particular order :3
Roanies Manip Tutorial(Love this one!)
Hope these help<3

Edited at December 19, 2023 08:33 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique December 20, 2023 02:45 PM


WildWillow
 
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The first things I notice are a lack of a shadow on the ground and a lack of depth (shadow/highlight) on your horses. I definitely recommend checking out the tutorials that KPH has listed. I think learning to place a shadow on the ground as well as add shadows and highlights to your horse, mane/tail, and wings will really take your art to a next level. :) I go over this in my tutorial (KPH linked to it).

I think another thing to pay attention to is the tone of your background compared to the horse. For example, the background of your last piece is very blue/green toned while your horse has more of a yellow tone. If your program has a Color Balance tool, you can use this to adjust the tone of your horse to match the same tones as your background. This can be super helpful to get your horse to "fit" in its background.
You can also adjust the tones of the "extras" in your art (antlers, wings, animals) to fit both your horse and the background.
It's amazing what difference the little details can make!

I think you really have down the other major foundation components to art - such as horse body prep and the beginnings of grounding. For your grounding, I would go in with a softer, translucent brush to erase legs so it blends easier into your background.
I really like your manes and tails - that last piece especially has some phenomenal hair action!

If you have any questions, my mailbox is always open!

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