MakeEm Fancy
10:03:53 Ally 💜
Well my connection is being rude and I need to get some sleep. Night guys
MakeEm Fancy
09:59:22 Ally 💜
A definite success lol hopefully I wont have to do it again @revel
Belle
09:58:13 

My whole family is pretty tall on my mothers side (mother is 5'11 and and grandpa was 6'7 >.>) but mr fathers side is Scottish and there fore he's about 5'5 so the same height as me. We still make fun of my younger brother for being short at 6'0 if that makes anyone feel better 😭 I'm about 5'4 and no one is allowed to bully my dad and I lol
Revel Ranch
09:57:06 
@Ally, I would call that a success.
MakeEm Fancy
09:56:02 Ally 💜
Im not entirely sure how I got out either but I did with the box.
Revel Ranch
09:53:33 
@Ally, at least you could laugh about it! XD
ShiningStar Stables
09:52:51 Chey / Star
Thanks DD, I'll PM you!
MakeEm Fancy
09:52:18 Ally 💜
Funny story time. I went to go get diapers for my little one and the only had one box left in the whole store and it was pushed all the way to the back so I couldnt reach it....I decided it would be a good idea to crawl into the shelf that it was on and got myself stuck 😅😂 It was a good laugh with the hubby later on
Dash and Duchess
09:51:57 DD (#2)
I can Chey :P
ShiningStar Stables
09:50:17 Chey / Star
Does someone want to help me decide on a match for a embryo I have?
Revel Ranch
09:49:22 
@Ally, I would never do that. People can be so mean. >=(
MakeEm Fancy
09:48:40 Ally 💜
Yeah I do that also lol but the shortness is a struggle also and I feel like people laugh at me when I cant reach stuff
Revel Ranch
09:47:25 
I was talking about comparing yourself to others. ;)
Sunset River Arabian
09:47:02 Athena - AAs
The more I look the more the hair textures bother me. they dont blend smooth
-Click-
Revel Ranch
09:46:54 
@Ally, yeah it is hard not to that. Definitely something I struggle with.
MakeEm Fancy
09:46:53 Ally 💜
Im only 5' and have to constantly ask people for help reaching stuff lol
Revel Ranch
09:45:37 
To this day I still have people point at me and say, "She's so big!" Like thanks... I'm only 5' 11", calm down. XD
MakeEm Fancy
09:44:38 Ally 💜
I feel the same way <3 Im short so its definitely hard not comparing myself to others
MakeEm Fancy
09:42:09 Ally 💜
Im doing it for myself but also because I hurt all the time and part of it is because of my weight problem
Revel Ranch
09:41:56 
@Ally, kudos to you! I am not super overweight, but I am sensitive to the way I look. Being tall I have always struggled with feeling bigger than most girls.
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Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:52 AM


Golden Crest
 
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Hey everyone!

I am still learning the ropes of art and finding my style, so I would love some critique of my progress so far. Here are some pieces I have done with different themes, I would love if anyone experienced in the art field could please give me some pointers?

I really do thank you in advance and appreciate your time :)



Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:36 PM


Olive
 
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Though im not in the art field id like to say your style is unique in a way and really cute
But #1 The WIngs Need To be Blended Into The Body And The Color Match the Coat
#2 Your Eyes Need A Bit Of Work
#3 Try Blending your legs Into The Grass A Bit more or add a layer or grass ontop of it
#4 same thing
#5 I think the fawns lighting is a bit off
#6 its my favorite but try to blend the socket of the wing in a bit
Art Critique December 19, 2023 04:21 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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I agree with Olive, but the biggest thing is shadows and reflections <3 I don't know which app you use, but I love Krita.
I've been compiling my favorite tutorials for a while now, I'll edit in a bit with em<3
Edit: Here they all are, in no particular order :3
Roanies Manip Tutorial(Love this one!)
Hope these help<3

Edited at December 19, 2023 08:33 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique December 20, 2023 02:45 PM


WildWillow
 
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The first things I notice are a lack of a shadow on the ground and a lack of depth (shadow/highlight) on your horses. I definitely recommend checking out the tutorials that KPH has listed. I think learning to place a shadow on the ground as well as add shadows and highlights to your horse, mane/tail, and wings will really take your art to a next level. :) I go over this in my tutorial (KPH linked to it).

I think another thing to pay attention to is the tone of your background compared to the horse. For example, the background of your last piece is very blue/green toned while your horse has more of a yellow tone. If your program has a Color Balance tool, you can use this to adjust the tone of your horse to match the same tones as your background. This can be super helpful to get your horse to "fit" in its background.
You can also adjust the tones of the "extras" in your art (antlers, wings, animals) to fit both your horse and the background.
It's amazing what difference the little details can make!

I think you really have down the other major foundation components to art - such as horse body prep and the beginnings of grounding. For your grounding, I would go in with a softer, translucent brush to erase legs so it blends easier into your background.
I really like your manes and tails - that last piece especially has some phenomenal hair action!

If you have any questions, my mailbox is always open!

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