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Namerik Stables
08:06:26 Rose
Ash you must be very lucky because in my experience they don't work
Black Raven TBs
08:05:34 
Cloud Peak Stables im having the same lag issues too
Cloud Peak Stables
08:02:05 Cloud
It always gets better as soon as I start thinking about posting in the bug forum lol
Legacy Elm
07:56:28 Gabs
This is the first time I am experiencing the lag besides the verification thign the other day.
Cloud Peak Stables
07:55:27 Cloud
I'm tempted to say something about these random lags because they're happening pretty often, and usually when very few people are on so it's not a traffic issue.
Ashcroft Park Stud
07:55:15 Ash
With maps on capture day the ratings are generally ok, in my experience
Legacy Elm
07:55:10 Gabs
Still pinching myself over the EWW amber champagne I got this RO..
-HEE Click-
Namerik Stables
07:54:01 Rose
Ash
Ashcroft Park Stud
07:53:56 Ash
Oooh lovely grey girlie
Namerik Stables
07:53:49 Rose
I don't care about the colour I'm just sick and tired of getting below triple p
Legacy Elm
07:53:40 Gabs
Sorry Cloud & Myth, I fear I jinxed you guys LOL
Mythological
07:53:14 RIP-Tim:2016-26
My current favorite Wild
-HEE Click-
Namerik Stables
07:53:05 Rose
Same here
Ashcroft Park Stud
07:52:56 Ash
I'd be happy with one or two EEE wild bays, feel like I hardly capture any now
Mythological
07:52:52 RIP-Tim:2016-26
Now that you said something I lagged lol
Namerik Stables
07:52:44 Rose
Also what does the flower mean
Cloud Peak Stables
07:52:25 Cloud
It's laggy for me Gabs. It seems to be happening pretty regularly lately.
Legacy Elm
07:52:17 Gabs
Dosie, that is not silver. Here is an example of silver on a foal: -HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
Namerik Stables
07:50:51 Rose
I just hope I get EWE+ rated horses
Ashcroft Park Stud
07:50:40 Ash
Probably gulastra's plume

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Namerik Stables
08:06:26 Rose
Ash you must be very lucky because in my experience they don't work
Black Raven TBs
08:05:34 
Cloud Peak Stables im having the same lag issues too
Cloud Peak Stables
08:02:05 Cloud
It always gets better as soon as I start thinking about posting in the bug forum lol
Legacy Elm
07:56:28 Gabs
This is the first time I am experiencing the lag besides the verification thign the other day.
Cloud Peak Stables
07:55:27 Cloud
I'm tempted to say something about these random lags because they're happening pretty often, and usually when very few people are on so it's not a traffic issue.
Ashcroft Park Stud
07:55:15 Ash
With maps on capture day the ratings are generally ok, in my experience
Legacy Elm
07:55:10 Gabs
Still pinching myself over the EWW amber champagne I got this RO..
-HEE Click-
Namerik Stables
07:54:01 Rose
Ash
Ashcroft Park Stud
07:53:56 Ash
Oooh lovely grey girlie
Namerik Stables
07:53:49 Rose
I don't care about the colour I'm just sick and tired of getting below triple p
Legacy Elm
07:53:40 Gabs
Sorry Cloud & Myth, I fear I jinxed you guys LOL
Mythological
07:53:14 RIP-Tim:2016-26
My current favorite Wild
-HEE Click-
Namerik Stables
07:53:05 Rose
Same here
Ashcroft Park Stud
07:52:56 Ash
I'd be happy with one or two EEE wild bays, feel like I hardly capture any now
Mythological
07:52:52 RIP-Tim:2016-26
Now that you said something I lagged lol
Namerik Stables
07:52:44 Rose
Also what does the flower mean
Cloud Peak Stables
07:52:25 Cloud
It's laggy for me Gabs. It seems to be happening pretty regularly lately.
Legacy Elm
07:52:17 Gabs
Dosie, that is not silver. Here is an example of silver on a foal: -HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
Namerik Stables
07:50:51 Rose
I just hope I get EWE+ rated horses
Ashcroft Park Stud
07:50:40 Ash
Probably gulastra's plume

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Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:52 AM


Golden Crest
 
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Hey everyone!

I am still learning the ropes of art and finding my style, so I would love some critique of my progress so far. Here are some pieces I have done with different themes, I would love if anyone experienced in the art field could please give me some pointers?

I really do thank you in advance and appreciate your time :)



Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:36 PM


Olive
 
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Though im not in the art field id like to say your style is unique in a way and really cute
But #1 The WIngs Need To be Blended Into The Body And The Color Match the Coat
#2 Your Eyes Need A Bit Of Work
#3 Try Blending your legs Into The Grass A Bit more or add a layer or grass ontop of it
#4 same thing
#5 I think the fawns lighting is a bit off
#6 its my favorite but try to blend the socket of the wing in a bit
Art Critique December 19, 2023 04:21 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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I agree with Olive, but the biggest thing is shadows and reflections <3 I don't know which app you use, but I love Krita.
I've been compiling my favorite tutorials for a while now, I'll edit in a bit with em<3
Edit: Here they all are, in no particular order :3
Roanies Manip Tutorial(Love this one!)
Hope these help<3

Edited at December 19, 2023 08:33 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique December 20, 2023 02:45 PM


WildWillow
 
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The first things I notice are a lack of a shadow on the ground and a lack of depth (shadow/highlight) on your horses. I definitely recommend checking out the tutorials that KPH has listed. I think learning to place a shadow on the ground as well as add shadows and highlights to your horse, mane/tail, and wings will really take your art to a next level. :) I go over this in my tutorial (KPH linked to it).

I think another thing to pay attention to is the tone of your background compared to the horse. For example, the background of your last piece is very blue/green toned while your horse has more of a yellow tone. If your program has a Color Balance tool, you can use this to adjust the tone of your horse to match the same tones as your background. This can be super helpful to get your horse to "fit" in its background.
You can also adjust the tones of the "extras" in your art (antlers, wings, animals) to fit both your horse and the background.
It's amazing what difference the little details can make!

I think you really have down the other major foundation components to art - such as horse body prep and the beginnings of grounding. For your grounding, I would go in with a softer, translucent brush to erase legs so it blends easier into your background.
I really like your manes and tails - that last piece especially has some phenomenal hair action!

If you have any questions, my mailbox is always open!

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