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Angel Haven
10:52:30 Hay Hay
Ivy, that sucks, I know how that feels.
Gypsy Family Farm
10:52:20 
Ivy; I don't know who Wylder is, but I do know a LOT about fandom and fandom relationships. They can be very difficult to maintain, because when you are friends over one shared interest, sometimes it can fracture very easily; and that's okay. It happens. It's hard as well because when you are young you have all the physical and mental changes making everything ten times more intense. Were any of these friends IRL friends?
Crestwood Eq.
10:51:56 Ivy / poison ivy
and please. tell the truth. A or B

A: -Click-

B: -Click-
Crestwood Eq.
10:47:34 Ivy / poison ivy
this was not how i planned to feel on the days coming ot my birthday. but whatever. my mom flipped her lid at me on my 10th birthday for god knows why.
Crestwood Eq.
10:46:27 Ivy / poison ivy
i've always been the person who thought so and so was her bestie, but i wasn't their bestie.
Crestwood Eq.
10:45:59 Ivy / poison ivy
gypsy

im going to be 14 on monday.
Crestwood Eq.
10:45:08 Ivy / poison ivy
void

i try my best. i swear.
Sunni
10:44:43 Sunni bunny
But afterwards she came up to apologize.
Took a year but XD.
one of her family told a lie about my family talking trash.
Never happened, they just missed understood.
We where talking about my brothers jumping in the pool and ripping holes in the bottom of it.
Crestwood Eq.
10:44:36 Ivy / poison ivy
Arctic

i guess. i hate life. i've tried and tried my whole life to please people. i've said sorry to people i know wont accept it. i've done all i can. im not perfect. there are so many things in my life that i should've been said sorry to for, but you know, i wasn't. i've lost too many people in my life that i try my hardest to keep the people i can.

AND NO ONE WILL EVER TALK ABOUT MY WYLDER LIKE THAT!

Sunni
10:43:07 Sunni bunny
Ivy, sounds like you might be putting your friendship into people who don't really know how friendship works.
Friendship is about understanding, flexibility, being there.
Me and my best friend Cameron, have been together since kindergarten.
We have fought before one was pretty nasty.
Gypsy Family Farm
10:42:19 
And that's okay, Ivy; forgive me if it sounds like I am talking down to you, I'm absolutely not.

But you may not have found your person yet. I gather that you are younger, correct me if I am wrong, and it's hard to stay with people some times while everyone is growing and changing. I had a best friend until I was about twelve, and then after that I had a lot of really good friends, but not one person alone, if that makes sense?
The Old Gods
10:41:26 Void Malign
to be honest, if you keep getting dropped by friends, it's probably a sign to examine yourself and your behavior.
Glacier Bay Cove
10:40:30 Arctic Katz
Sounds like they were never true friends at all, in my opinion
Crestwood Eq.
10:39:49 Ivy / poison ivy
arctic

thanks.


this girl (her brother said that to me). she was my best friend. sad truth reveal. i've never had a best friend that stayed for over 8 months.
Crestwood Eq.
10:39:02 Ivy / poison ivy
but you dont understand
Glacier Bay Cove
10:38:47 Arctic Katz
Not sure what is going on, but I will always be a friend to you, Crestwood
Gypsy Family Farm
10:38:42 
Also? If you have lost friends over this, they weren't real friends, they were fandom friends. (I've been there. Still hurts.)
Gypsy Family Farm
10:37:51 
Ivy, that sounds like a good person to block if you can; this kind of social media bullying can escalate and it's already pretty personal.
Crestwood Eq.
10:36:53 Ivy / poison ivy
and now i've lost like 4-6 best friends this month.
Gypsy Family Farm
10:36:47 
Okay this is a new quest. Capture 8 triple subpar horses. LOL.

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Angel Haven
10:52:30 Hay Hay
Ivy, that sucks, I know how that feels.
Gypsy Family Farm
10:52:20 
Ivy; I don't know who Wylder is, but I do know a LOT about fandom and fandom relationships. They can be very difficult to maintain, because when you are friends over one shared interest, sometimes it can fracture very easily; and that's okay. It happens. It's hard as well because when you are young you have all the physical and mental changes making everything ten times more intense. Were any of these friends IRL friends?
Crestwood Eq.
10:51:56 Ivy / poison ivy
and please. tell the truth. A or B

A: -Click-

B: -Click-
Crestwood Eq.
10:47:34 Ivy / poison ivy
this was not how i planned to feel on the days coming ot my birthday. but whatever. my mom flipped her lid at me on my 10th birthday for god knows why.
Crestwood Eq.
10:46:27 Ivy / poison ivy
i've always been the person who thought so and so was her bestie, but i wasn't their bestie.
Crestwood Eq.
10:45:59 Ivy / poison ivy
gypsy

im going to be 14 on monday.
Crestwood Eq.
10:45:08 Ivy / poison ivy
void

i try my best. i swear.
Sunni
10:44:43 Sunni bunny
But afterwards she came up to apologize.
Took a year but XD.
one of her family told a lie about my family talking trash.
Never happened, they just missed understood.
We where talking about my brothers jumping in the pool and ripping holes in the bottom of it.
Crestwood Eq.
10:44:36 Ivy / poison ivy
Arctic

i guess. i hate life. i've tried and tried my whole life to please people. i've said sorry to people i know wont accept it. i've done all i can. im not perfect. there are so many things in my life that i should've been said sorry to for, but you know, i wasn't. i've lost too many people in my life that i try my hardest to keep the people i can.

AND NO ONE WILL EVER TALK ABOUT MY WYLDER LIKE THAT!

Sunni
10:43:07 Sunni bunny
Ivy, sounds like you might be putting your friendship into people who don't really know how friendship works.
Friendship is about understanding, flexibility, being there.
Me and my best friend Cameron, have been together since kindergarten.
We have fought before one was pretty nasty.
Gypsy Family Farm
10:42:19 
And that's okay, Ivy; forgive me if it sounds like I am talking down to you, I'm absolutely not.

But you may not have found your person yet. I gather that you are younger, correct me if I am wrong, and it's hard to stay with people some times while everyone is growing and changing. I had a best friend until I was about twelve, and then after that I had a lot of really good friends, but not one person alone, if that makes sense?
The Old Gods
10:41:26 Void Malign
to be honest, if you keep getting dropped by friends, it's probably a sign to examine yourself and your behavior.
Glacier Bay Cove
10:40:30 Arctic Katz
Sounds like they were never true friends at all, in my opinion
Crestwood Eq.
10:39:49 Ivy / poison ivy
arctic

thanks.


this girl (her brother said that to me). she was my best friend. sad truth reveal. i've never had a best friend that stayed for over 8 months.
Crestwood Eq.
10:39:02 Ivy / poison ivy
but you dont understand
Glacier Bay Cove
10:38:47 Arctic Katz
Not sure what is going on, but I will always be a friend to you, Crestwood
Gypsy Family Farm
10:38:42 
Also? If you have lost friends over this, they weren't real friends, they were fandom friends. (I've been there. Still hurts.)
Gypsy Family Farm
10:37:51 
Ivy, that sounds like a good person to block if you can; this kind of social media bullying can escalate and it's already pretty personal.
Crestwood Eq.
10:36:53 Ivy / poison ivy
and now i've lost like 4-6 best friends this month.
Gypsy Family Farm
10:36:47 
Okay this is a new quest. Capture 8 triple subpar horses. LOL.

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The Official Art Critique Forum October 14, 2019 01:44 PM


Toxic Carnage
 
Posts: 3182
#466184
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https://i.postimg.cc/LsYR50qT/Untitled34-20191013181515.png

https://i.postimg.cc/pLbXJ51Q/Untitled25-20191009210207.png
What can I do better here?

Edited at October 14, 2019 01:45 PM by AnimeAcres
The Official Art Critique Forum October 14, 2019 04:16 PM


Trillium Acres
 
Posts: 604
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Raven, I would say anywhere from 30-50k for the set. Full avatar could be like 70kish :) I can be bad at pricing though, so if anyone else has any ideas, help Raven out!

Anime,
-Banner:

So for the banner the first thing that I notice is that the image is a bit grainy, is that fixable? Next thing is that the hair needs some more detailing and highlighting. Same goes for the horse as it all looks a bit flat. Also the eye does look a bit unrealistic. Maybe reference the link down below and search for the eye part of the video. I believe it is towards the end.

(I'm copy and pasting the highlighting advice I gave to Raven on the first page.)

I would use a pastel yellow color or a pastel blue for the back (Depends if your lighting is warm or cool. In this case I would us a yellow.) Very small brush size. 1-2 px on a pressure sensitive hard brush. After those each have their own layer, set the whole layer to overlay and mess with the opacity. Do this highlighting process for the horse and hair. It will make the image crisper and less flat.
I reference Manduh's youtube a bunch for my art, this time stamp might help you with highlighting. It helped me tremendously.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9xltza9Ojtw&t=551s
Time stamp:
32:36

-Avatar:

This image could use some of the same highlights mentioned above. Apply these everywhere. The eye on this one also is a little unrealistic. Next thing is that the hair looks blurry and kind of matted looking (not like "dreadlock" matting that you would see on regular hair. What I'm trying to say is that it looks kind of clumped together. There aren't really any flyaways or strands if you get what I mean.) and the forelock is a bit too thick. The position on the hair looks good, but if you decide to re-do he hair you would add some fly-aways. For the hair I recommend a soft pressure-sensitive brush set to 1-2 px.

Reference this for hair!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AtNt3bT6fGo
Time stamp:
12:11

Hope this helped everyone (and made sense lol)! :)

Edited at October 14, 2019 04:23 PM by Trillium Acres
The Official Art Critique Forum October 14, 2019 05:23 PM


Toxic Carnage
 
Posts: 3182
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Thanks! :D
The Official Art Critique Forum October 14, 2019 06:47 PM


Sunset Grove Farm
 
Posts: 7336
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https://i.postimg.cc/MKc37f35/Untitled283-1.jpg
I would love some critique on this premade please :)
The Official Art Critique Forum October 16, 2019 04:20 PM

Former Stable
 
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The reflection on the eye is white,which should be a grayish blue in a normal light but because the reflection is from a fire ,eye drop the colour from the film and lighten it a little,then use that as the reflective color
The Official Art Critique Forum October 16, 2019 04:29 PM


Sunset Grove Farm
 
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I'm way too tired and didn't understand any of that :')
(not trying to be rude but I'm exhausted lol, I have school tommorow and I'm up mate again)
The Official Art Critique Forum October 16, 2019 08:37 PM

Former Stable
 
Posts: 0
#468169
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Looking for Critique and a good price
https://i.postimg.cc/DfSMpbHx/My-Drawing-5.jpg
https://i.postimg.cc/J4XmvhGW/My-Drawing-6.jpg

Edited at October 17, 2019 02:22 PM by White Forest Farms
The Official Art Critique Forum October 17, 2019 06:45 PM


Unexpected Visitor
 
Posts: 1348
#469061
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Recent artwork. Critique?
*click for quality*

https://i.postimg.cc/28VCwyTD/Untitled375.jpg
The Official Art Critique Forum October 18, 2019 02:33 PM


Sunset Grove Farm
 
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I'm awful at pricing so can't help with that sorry

Peice #1

Honestly this peice messes with my eyes, the horse has no contrast and the white outline is way too out there, is there any way to fix that?
Try adjusting shadows and highlights
I'm assuming the horse is meant to be ghost like? Try lowering the opacity of the horse so lighting is better and the ghost effect is more real

Peice #2

Very nice, however the image looks really stretched and unnatural, when moving images always have the ratio proportions locked so nothing is stretched, make sure you add shadows

Again try playing around with shadows highlights and even a bit of smudging

Also try blurring a little bit of the bg to add focus to the horse

White Forest Farms said:
Looking for Critique and a good price
https://i.postimg.cc/DfSMpbHx/My-Drawing-5.jpg
https://i.postimg.cc/J4XmvhGW/My-Drawing-6.jpg



The Official Art Critique Forum October 18, 2019 02:34 PM


Sunset Grove Farm
 
Posts: 7336
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Ughh luxxy this peice is genuinely to die for 🤤😍

The horses eye is glowing green, however the highlights and glow don't quite match, try adding some small strands of green on the hair and some 1px highlights on another layer on low opacity

Other than that it looks amazing!

Crystal Heart Estate said:
Recent artwork. Critique?
*click for quality*

https://i.postimg.cc/28VCwyTD/Untitled375.jpg




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