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Glacier Bay Cove
11:48:10 Arctic Katz
Jealous
Crestwood Eq.
11:47:53 Ivy / poison ivy
oo yay! my mom just texted me the plan for my birthday

Start at starbucks, then go to this crafting place, then lunch, then ice cream
Glacier Bay Cove
11:47:26 Arctic Katz
Maybe listen to some music
Crestwood Eq.
11:46:35 Ivy / poison ivy
any other ideas?
Transformers Acres
11:45:08 Geek, Eek
Good rating, shitty bravery. Lucky for me, I don't really bravery breed.

-HEE Click-
Crestwood Eq.
11:44:23 Ivy / poison ivy
Arctic

I would but im very artistically drained
Crestwood Eq.
11:43:51 Ivy / poison ivy
and i'll tell you guys if i can or cant lol
Glacier Bay Cove
11:43:40 Arctic Katz
How about doing some art
Sunni
11:43:34 Sunni bunny
Thank you Pheezy, she was a nice surprise.
I hope I can get her to throw me a WWW with her coat.
Crestwood Eq.
11:43:18 Ivy / poison ivy

What should i do after i finish typing this recipe. preferably, no computer/phone/tablet involved
Glacier Bay Cove
11:43:08 Arctic Katz
Help with what
Crestwood Eq.
11:42:48 Ivy / poison ivy
people, i need help
Glacier Bay Cove
11:42:39 Arctic Katz
After RO, I hope I can complete this quest Quest Level 100
Breeding
Breed a Brindle foal.
Reward: 10,000 Eden Bucks 15,000Store Credits
pandemoniu_m
11:42:39 pheezy
ooh sunni what a pretty girl
Sunni
11:41:34 Sunni bunny
-HEE Click-
I hope this girl dose well RO.
Crestwood Eq.
11:41:21 Ivy / poison ivy

What should i do after i finish typing this recipe. preferably, no computer/phone/tablet involved
MakeEm Fancy
11:41:08 Ally 💜
I have laundry to do but ugh I just want to lay around today
Transformers Acres
11:40:56 Geek, Eek
I mean, my uncle's girlfriend let's his 7 year old son watch Shameless, and other shit 7 year olds shouldn't watch. Same as his 12 year old daughter.
Crestwood Eq.
11:40:43 Ivy / poison ivy
Angel

we'll have to meet up sometime then and teach each other what we dont know xD
Glacier Bay Cove
11:40:42 Arctic Katz
And also a lot of crafting books

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Glacier Bay Cove
11:48:10 Arctic Katz
Jealous
Crestwood Eq.
11:47:53 Ivy / poison ivy
oo yay! my mom just texted me the plan for my birthday

Start at starbucks, then go to this crafting place, then lunch, then ice cream
Glacier Bay Cove
11:47:26 Arctic Katz
Maybe listen to some music
Crestwood Eq.
11:46:35 Ivy / poison ivy
any other ideas?
Transformers Acres
11:45:08 Geek, Eek
Good rating, shitty bravery. Lucky for me, I don't really bravery breed.

-HEE Click-
Crestwood Eq.
11:44:23 Ivy / poison ivy
Arctic

I would but im very artistically drained
Crestwood Eq.
11:43:51 Ivy / poison ivy
and i'll tell you guys if i can or cant lol
Glacier Bay Cove
11:43:40 Arctic Katz
How about doing some art
Sunni
11:43:34 Sunni bunny
Thank you Pheezy, she was a nice surprise.
I hope I can get her to throw me a WWW with her coat.
Crestwood Eq.
11:43:18 Ivy / poison ivy

What should i do after i finish typing this recipe. preferably, no computer/phone/tablet involved
Glacier Bay Cove
11:43:08 Arctic Katz
Help with what
Crestwood Eq.
11:42:48 Ivy / poison ivy
people, i need help
Glacier Bay Cove
11:42:39 Arctic Katz
After RO, I hope I can complete this quest Quest Level 100
Breeding
Breed a Brindle foal.
Reward: 10,000 Eden Bucks 15,000Store Credits
pandemoniu_m
11:42:39 pheezy
ooh sunni what a pretty girl
Sunni
11:41:34 Sunni bunny
-HEE Click-
I hope this girl dose well RO.
Crestwood Eq.
11:41:21 Ivy / poison ivy

What should i do after i finish typing this recipe. preferably, no computer/phone/tablet involved
MakeEm Fancy
11:41:08 Ally 💜
I have laundry to do but ugh I just want to lay around today
Transformers Acres
11:40:56 Geek, Eek
I mean, my uncle's girlfriend let's his 7 year old son watch Shameless, and other shit 7 year olds shouldn't watch. Same as his 12 year old daughter.
Crestwood Eq.
11:40:43 Ivy / poison ivy
Angel

we'll have to meet up sometime then and teach each other what we dont know xD
Glacier Bay Cove
11:40:42 Arctic Katz
And also a lot of crafting books

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The Official Art Critique Forum October 14, 2019 01:44 PM


Toxic Carnage
 
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https://i.postimg.cc/LsYR50qT/Untitled34-20191013181515.png

https://i.postimg.cc/pLbXJ51Q/Untitled25-20191009210207.png
What can I do better here?

Edited at October 14, 2019 01:45 PM by AnimeAcres
The Official Art Critique Forum October 14, 2019 04:16 PM


Trillium Acres
 
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Raven, I would say anywhere from 30-50k for the set. Full avatar could be like 70kish :) I can be bad at pricing though, so if anyone else has any ideas, help Raven out!

Anime,
-Banner:

So for the banner the first thing that I notice is that the image is a bit grainy, is that fixable? Next thing is that the hair needs some more detailing and highlighting. Same goes for the horse as it all looks a bit flat. Also the eye does look a bit unrealistic. Maybe reference the link down below and search for the eye part of the video. I believe it is towards the end.

(I'm copy and pasting the highlighting advice I gave to Raven on the first page.)

I would use a pastel yellow color or a pastel blue for the back (Depends if your lighting is warm or cool. In this case I would us a yellow.) Very small brush size. 1-2 px on a pressure sensitive hard brush. After those each have their own layer, set the whole layer to overlay and mess with the opacity. Do this highlighting process for the horse and hair. It will make the image crisper and less flat.
I reference Manduh's youtube a bunch for my art, this time stamp might help you with highlighting. It helped me tremendously.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9xltza9Ojtw&t=551s
Time stamp:
32:36

-Avatar:

This image could use some of the same highlights mentioned above. Apply these everywhere. The eye on this one also is a little unrealistic. Next thing is that the hair looks blurry and kind of matted looking (not like "dreadlock" matting that you would see on regular hair. What I'm trying to say is that it looks kind of clumped together. There aren't really any flyaways or strands if you get what I mean.) and the forelock is a bit too thick. The position on the hair looks good, but if you decide to re-do he hair you would add some fly-aways. For the hair I recommend a soft pressure-sensitive brush set to 1-2 px.

Reference this for hair!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AtNt3bT6fGo
Time stamp:
12:11

Hope this helped everyone (and made sense lol)! :)

Edited at October 14, 2019 04:23 PM by Trillium Acres
The Official Art Critique Forum October 14, 2019 05:23 PM


Toxic Carnage
 
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Thanks! :D
The Official Art Critique Forum October 14, 2019 06:47 PM


Sunset Grove Farm
 
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https://i.postimg.cc/MKc37f35/Untitled283-1.jpg
I would love some critique on this premade please :)
The Official Art Critique Forum October 16, 2019 04:20 PM

Former Stable
 
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The reflection on the eye is white,which should be a grayish blue in a normal light but because the reflection is from a fire ,eye drop the colour from the film and lighten it a little,then use that as the reflective color
The Official Art Critique Forum October 16, 2019 04:29 PM


Sunset Grove Farm
 
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I'm way too tired and didn't understand any of that :')
(not trying to be rude but I'm exhausted lol, I have school tommorow and I'm up mate again)
The Official Art Critique Forum October 16, 2019 08:37 PM

Former Stable
 
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Looking for Critique and a good price
https://i.postimg.cc/DfSMpbHx/My-Drawing-5.jpg
https://i.postimg.cc/J4XmvhGW/My-Drawing-6.jpg

Edited at October 17, 2019 02:22 PM by White Forest Farms
The Official Art Critique Forum October 17, 2019 06:45 PM


Unexpected Visitor
 
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Recent artwork. Critique?
*click for quality*

https://i.postimg.cc/28VCwyTD/Untitled375.jpg
The Official Art Critique Forum October 18, 2019 02:33 PM


Sunset Grove Farm
 
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I'm awful at pricing so can't help with that sorry

Peice #1

Honestly this peice messes with my eyes, the horse has no contrast and the white outline is way too out there, is there any way to fix that?
Try adjusting shadows and highlights
I'm assuming the horse is meant to be ghost like? Try lowering the opacity of the horse so lighting is better and the ghost effect is more real

Peice #2

Very nice, however the image looks really stretched and unnatural, when moving images always have the ratio proportions locked so nothing is stretched, make sure you add shadows

Again try playing around with shadows highlights and even a bit of smudging

Also try blurring a little bit of the bg to add focus to the horse

White Forest Farms said:
Looking for Critique and a good price
https://i.postimg.cc/DfSMpbHx/My-Drawing-5.jpg
https://i.postimg.cc/J4XmvhGW/My-Drawing-6.jpg



The Official Art Critique Forum October 18, 2019 02:34 PM


Sunset Grove Farm
 
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Ughh luxxy this peice is genuinely to die for 🤤😍

The horses eye is glowing green, however the highlights and glow don't quite match, try adding some small strands of green on the hair and some 1px highlights on another layer on low opacity

Other than that it looks amazing!

Crystal Heart Estate said:
Recent artwork. Critique?
*click for quality*

https://i.postimg.cc/28VCwyTD/Untitled375.jpg




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