Ranch Lands Training
01:18:02 Lilly/PON Addict
Indi - This match!
-HEE Click-
HoneyJaws
01:14:41 Rat | Shiny Wubs
maybe a D med, lilly?
im not sure either
Indiana Peaches
01:14:00 Indi
Good morning Noc!
Want to share the match Lilly?
Ranch Lands Training
01:12:28 Lilly/PON Addict
I want to use a breeding item for my high LB match but I don't know what. I just want my best chance of another LB foal
The Golden Stars
01:10:11 Noc
good morning all
Willowtree ranch
01:10:09 
Ranch Lands
Ooooh show me what you get!
Indiana Peaches
01:09:30 Indi
Several ROs I just wake up at 4:30 am, buy my straws and go back to bed lol
Ranch Lands Training
01:08:48 Lilly/PON Addict
I'm actually so nervous for these matches
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
HoneyJaws
01:08:35 Rat | Shiny Wubs
i only have three matches and only one big one, so i may just get up an hour or two after RO to give Mabon/Cinnamonrolls owners time to put up LCs. but i know Cinn probably sells out fast
Willowtree ranch
01:08:22 
No problem!
Ironworks Equestria
01:07:13 Reaver | Seven
Thank you, Willowtree.
Coastal Eventing
01:06:56 bella
I usually stay up for RO because I have to send out straws but in my opinion, RO is so much more enjoyable when I just log on after waking up and am not exhausted from staying up. Tricky if you don't want to miss out on certain straws or LCs though
Willowtree ranch
01:06:54 
Really? Good luck to you too.
Ranch Lands Training
01:06:36 Lilly/PON Addict
I think I'm just going to get on early. I'm waiting on straws for my matches so no point being on a 2 in the morning
Ironworks Equestria
01:06:20 Reaver | Seven
And same. It's at 3:30Am For me too
Willowtree ranch
01:05:45 
Dang 3:30? Good luck. I'd die if I had to wake up that early lol.
Ironworks Equestria
01:05:29 Reaver | Seven
I know I'm probably staying up and working on my project while waiting for RO
HoneyJaws
01:04:08 Rat | Shiny Wubs
debating if i should stay up for RO, or set an alarm and get up extra early.
its at 3:30am for me e_e
Willowtree ranch
01:03:17 
^^
Willowtree ranch
01:03:05 
Yep! Dang it I have to wait 7 hours.
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The Official Art Critique Forum October 13, 2019 11:13 AM

Sunset Grove Farm
 
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Joe the horse doesn't match the baclground
There are plenty of tutorials on deviant art to help you but from what I'm able to do-

Duplicate the background layer, put it on a clipping mask to the horse layer and blur so its just blobs of colour, then switch this layer to one of the following
Soft.light
Overlay
Colour

Then mess with the opacity. If it still looks a little out of place dupliactae the horse layer so you have backup then bead with brightness and contrast and/or colour change
The Official Art Critique Forum October 13, 2019 11:23 AM

Lambo Farms
 
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https://i.postimg.cc/W3nDPTDk/Untitled375-2.jpg
thoughts on this?

Edited at October 13, 2019 11:44 AM by Lambo Farms
The Official Art Critique Forum October 13, 2019 11:47 AM
Former Stable
 
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Lambo Farms said:
https://i.postimg.cc/jj7CCRB9/Untitled375-1.jpg
thoughts on this?


That is gorgeous!! I love the mane and the background choice is beautiful. The only thing I can see is the hooves are obviously blurred. Try making it seem like they're under the water by playing with the different colors and brushes.

Edited at October 13, 2019 11:48 AM by White Forest Farms
The Official Art Critique Forum October 13, 2019 11:50 AM

Trillium Acres
 
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Lambo Farms said:
https://i.postimg.cc/jj7CCRB9/Untitled375-1.jpg
thoughts on this? I have not finished the tail yet.



Hey!

To start off, the hooves are very blurry. Try finding some water splash stock and putting over the hooves (adjust the opacity of the splash layer if it looks funny).

Next... The horse doesn't really match the background. They are two different lightings- Warm and cool[er] (The horse is warm and the background is too cool for it to look realistic with the horse.) If you dont want to replace the background, I would play around with hues and balance on the horse and bg. You could also blur the bg a little if you want to draw more attention to the horse.

The mane and tail look fine, but I would add some shadows and a [few] harsh highlights (with the layer set to overlay). Apply the highlights all over the body\wherever you want the viewer to focus.

One last thing... The credits are a bit hard to read due to the trees in the background. Maybe try moving the credits to the bottom or another place where they are more visible :P

Hope this makes sense and helps :D

Edited at October 13, 2019 11:51 AM by Trillium Acres
The Official Art Critique Forum October 13, 2019 11:51 AM

Sunset Grove Farm
 
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This peice is great

Some pointers

-the tail wouldn't be so thick and straight, try adding some curve near the bottom in the opposite direction

-as stated ahive the hooves are blurred, when it comes to situations like these the hooves would be covered by water but not completely
~to do this dupliactate the horse layer, erase some of the hooves on one layer and lower the opacity of the other layer

-try blurring some of the bg to add more focus to the subject [the horse]

-the horse would have more green and cyan hues, try messing around with the colour change option

For the tailill do a quick red pen for the image now

Lambo Farms said:
https://i.postimg.cc/W3nDPTDk/Untitled375-2.jpg
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The Official Art Critique Forum October 13, 2019 11:54 AM

Trillium Acres
 
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Sunset Grove Farm said:

-the tail wouldn't be so thick and straight, try adding some curve near the bottom in the opposite direction



I agree with Sunset on this. I hadn't even thought about it lol!
Thank you for making a red pen :)
The Official Art Critique Forum October 13, 2019 12:30 PM

Sunset Grove Farm
 
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https://i.postimg.cc/HLkTdZtk/Untitled291.png
Here ya are

Lambo Farms said:
https://i.postimg.cc/W3nDPTDk/Untitled375-2.jpg
thoughts on this?



The Official Art Critique Forum October 13, 2019 05:02 PM

Caprina Springs
 
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https://i.postimg.cc/pdPD8mQ4/bbbb3-2.jpg
i would love to hear thoughts on this! I did this in about roughly 2-3 days :/ and i havent properly resized it yet so the quality isnt the best >.<

Edited at October 13, 2019 05:03 PM by Captain Marvel
The Official Art Critique Forum October 13, 2019 05:09 PM

Lambo Farms
 
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Captain Marvel said:
https://i.postimg.cc/pdPD8mQ4/bbbb3-2.jpg
i would love to hear thoughts on this! I did this in about roughly 2-3 days :/ and i havent properly resized it yet so the quality isnt the best >.<


I would say to blend the feet in the ground and the end of the tail spreads kinda of funny.
The Official Art Critique Forum October 13, 2019 05:12 PM

Caprina Springs
 
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Lambo Farms said:


Captain Marvel said:
https://i.postimg.cc/pdPD8mQ4/bbbb3-2.jpg
i would love to hear thoughts on this! I did this in about roughly 2-3 days :/ and i havent properly resized it yet so the quality isnt the best >.<


I would say to blend the feet in the ground and the end of the tail spreads kinda of funny.


well i would have blended feet and paid more attention to the tail but it is supposed to be made into a set and i only had 3 days to complete. i will take extra precaution to this next time though, thank you!

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