Bioshock Manor
05:06:37 Storm
I'm sure it will
Sunstone Elite
05:05:49 Sun/Sunny
I firmly pray and hope karma will bite him in the ass.
Bioshock Manor
05:04:36 Storm
The world would know what he did lol
FirstLightFarms
05:03:46 puck
oh yikes what an ass. good for you though!
Sunstone Elite
05:02:17 Sun/Sunny
Oh he was also still seeing me while dating her :P That's the night I blocked him. But yes, if I am able to see her eventually out somewhere I will. I was extremely petty though Puck trust me LOL.
FirstLightFarms
05:01:11 puck
oop id be giving that girlfriend a big heads up if possible. tell his mother. blow up his life. im petty like that though.
Ranch Lands Training
05:00:20 Lilly/PON Addict
That's good Sunny! (that you haven't talked to him, not that he is playing over his girlfriend)
Sunstone Elite
04:59:21 Sun/Sunny
I haven't seen nor spoken to him in 3 months now since I blocked him which is a big win but alas, it is still not easy :P small victories though. I do feel bad for his gf, who he isn't loyal to, and hope she catches him and leaves him someday.
FirstLightFarms
04:57:51 puck
oh honey. florida equestrians can be brutal. you gotta have tough tough skin and a bit of a bite to handle it

oh noo sunny. lessons learned :(
Sunstone Elite
04:56:23 Sun/Sunny
That we do
Ranch Lands Training
04:56:08 Lilly/PON Addict
That really sucks Sun. But I guess some lessons you learn the hard way
Sunstone Elite
04:55:12 Sun/Sunny
Thanks Puck ;_; Me too. But yea, I get that too Lilly. Granted, my friends did warn me that the guy I was seeing/talking to was a piece of shit, and he is, it just took me a year and a half to see that :X oops.
Ranch Lands Training
04:52:52 Lilly/PON Addict
Puck - She thought Florida would be the best spot to get her foot in the door as far as horses go. Instead middle aged women told her she has no hope and should just go home 🙃
Ranch Lands Training
04:51:26 Lilly/PON Addict
Sun - I total get the leaving home due to mental health. I have felt better since leaving Alberta. I loved the province but I needed a step away from the people and my connections
FirstLightFarms
04:51:20 puck
ugh im sorry sunny. hopefully you find something soon
FirstLightFarms
04:51:05 puck
ohhh no florida is like jumping straight into the armpit of america. she could've started anywhere else and it would've been better for getting her feet wet lol
SugarplumStables
04:50:06 Brookie Cookie
No problem Bunni!
Ranch Lands Training
04:50:03 Lilly/PON Addict
Virginia should be fun! She left Canada to be in Florida, she wanted to come home but I convinced her to just try a different state before totally giving up
Golden Yards
04:49:40 Bunni
Brookie
That's actually supper cute!! Thank you ^^
Sunstone Elite
04:49:14 Sun/Sunny
That's why I left home too Lilly, my mental health had gone to shit. Then I met a dude here and it continued to be shit but I finally broke away from him and have slowly but surely been doing better. But I know moving back home would not be good in the long run for me, so everything just kind of sucks right now LOL
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Looking for heavy critique! February 22, 2021 11:12 AM

Cherry River Elites
 
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I need some hard critique on this. Two different wing colors as well, completely insignificant, ignore that. Be as harsh as you need to, I feel like I could improve a lot. This is actually my best art yet, but you're probably super bored with all my rambling on by now, so I'll shut up and let the masters work their critique magic.
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Looking for heavy critique! February 22, 2021 11:19 AM
Former Stable
 
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Honestly the biggest thing for me is just how pixelated it looks, I would try using smaller brush sizes so it doesn't look as blocky. I think you were trying to do a braided mane and tail but the tail is very thin. The pink nose is also darker than it needs to be.
The definition on the chest is great though but I would try and carry that through the rest of the horse more, especially on the dark sections on the legs.
Looking for heavy critique! February 22, 2021 12:53 PM

Florestä
 
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I think it looks really good. Would definitely buy.
Looking for heavy critique! February 22, 2021 01:02 PM

Thistleberry Farm
 
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i think the definition on the chest is good. but with the legs you need to finish them way more smoothly, makin sure to rub out any bits coming off the legs, and maybe smudge the dark layers on the legs so they blend with the buckskin color of the horse, because at the moment they look very abrupt and not right.
with the hair you attemted to do braids, and honestly you shouldnt have. it looks odd and pixelated, a bit like dreadlocks. i would have done the hair either long, flowy and dark, or short but smooth. the pink snip on the nose is too pink, try softening that.
now with the wings. honestly, they arent that great. along the tops of them need to be more swooshy and curved, more angelic. the tip bits of them look to pixelated an round, like you have just done them with a mouse. try smudging them (use a low strenght smudge) to create a better effect.
Looking for heavy critique! February 22, 2021 01:10 PM

Cherry River Elites
 
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White Hills- Thanks. I was actually using the smallest brushes possible, because I suck at resizing, so I was using a 500x500 canvas. But I'll definitely work on more definition on the legs.
Sage Brush Stables- I love you <3
Olive Tree Equine- Dang :'). What do you mean by 'bits coming off the legs'? The braids were actually supposed to look like that, but if I were trying to do nicer braids, I'd use a better brush. I also thought the pink looked off- just wasn't sure why. I meant to make the wings look slightly twisted. But I'll definitely use those tips for other wings I make.
Thanks everyone!
Looking for heavy critique! February 22, 2021 01:18 PM

Thistleberry Farm
 
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sorry to be so harsh XD i meant for example the front left leg, there are bis where you have repainted it darker where you havent rubbed it all out so there are small pixels coming off the leg in places.
Looking for heavy critique! February 22, 2021 01:22 PM

Cherry River Elites
 
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Ah, I see that now. Thank you!
Looking for heavy critique! February 22, 2021 01:27 PM

TenaciTea
 
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My main thing with this is the wings.
If you look at bird wings, they aren't completely straight.
When I draw wings (that aren't super anatomically correct) I do two gentle curves basically going on the opposite directions.
Ignore that this is a completely different art style than what you're working with xD
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If you look at the wings on this, you see that they're not straight, and it makes the horse look more like it's in motion. If you wanted the wings to look more level to the ground, you could decrease the angle/curve of the wings.
Looking for heavy critique! February 23, 2021 01:03 AM

Azrail Elites
 
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What program do you use?
Looking for heavy critique! February 23, 2021 07:55 AM

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