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I'm blushing ☺️ thsnks so much for the tips. <3 |
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@Madsie Aww, no problem 😊 |
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I cannot for the life of me decide what's missing. Any tips? |
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@Breezie A few things I can pick on, lol. First of all, the whiskers/horns/leg decal. These items seem to have no semblance of lighting, they're just there. The whisker specifically, I at first thought it was just an accidental line. It doesn't really connect to the horse at all like a real whisker. Second, draw that horse eye a reflection <3 I'm not genuinely sure what's going on with the fetlock feathery things. One looks like a fin, the back two are just hanging out, the other front one is crazy 😝 Maybe try to make those more similar to each other. Next, the (viewer's) left back leg. It seems very dark/in shadow compared to the rest of the horse's body. Try lightening it up and adding some muscling. I feel like the horse should be casting a shadow over the wall along with more of the forest. Other than that, lighting is very nice and aesthetically pleasing overall. Looking at the (viewer's) right ear, I can tell you drew the mane over it. Duplicate the horse layer, cut out the ear, then move that layer above the mane. This will make an overall cleaner appearance. Last part I'm going to pick on; the tail. Looking at both lighting and realism. Lighting is nonexistent - top should be lighter, bottom should be darker. I'm not sure what texture you were going for there. Really love the concept of this piece. Also wanted to add that I'm not trying to be rude whatsoever, just trying to help as much as I can <3 <3 |
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I agree with everything gem said :) I also feel there should be wings, like a dragons wings. It seems weird to just have a horse in the air. |
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Edited at September 29, 2020 03:32 PM by Breezie Rose
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Thank you both! I really appreciate all the tips, Gem! <3 I think when I posted that I was so tired and I thought it was done, so thanks for calling me out on (many) uncomplete things XD Madsie, I thought about doing wings, but the piece is Chinese based kinda and Chinese dragons don't have wings, so I thought it'd be cool to let the horse be wingless :D also I absolutely hate doing wings XD |
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@Breezie Lol, you're very welcome <3 I hope they're at least somewhat useful 😝🥰 |
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First one I feel remotely happy with as of late. Pointers and price estimates would be lovely. Apologies for the poor resolution. Thanks! Edited at October 2, 2020 10:30 AM by Purple Pegasus Farm |
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Purple Pegasus Farm said:
First one I feel remotely happy with as of late. Pointers and price estimates would be lovely. Apologies for the poor resolution. Thanks!
First of all I am going to steal this*_* |
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Warming, with Sleet and Heavy Icing
